I appreciate the work with the new dreamy designs, but somehow the lines used are too think, bold and silver or metallic. I am not sure if I like these versions....they also see a bit cartoon-y!!( if that is a word)!! I know I requested a more dreamy feel, I think you did capture that with the cloud bubbles, of your new submissions I like Entry
#36, 37 and 38 but again as I mentioned before the effect seems a bit too bold, think, cartoony,chunky and metallic...I was thinking may be thinner lines of different colour may seem more elegant and classy, I don't know...May be you can advise me?
Of all your designs I appreciate the Entry
#2 and its variation, I would have liked maintaining these some how with something added..i wish i could provide more guidance, its a shame I have no idea what i would add but I am thinking may be the text is to box-y and rigid...What are your thoughts?