I love the camera, but I think I would rather not have any "people" in the logo. I like the direction this is going though! Also like the colors.
One other thing that strikes me is that the "Denise Andrews" seems to be tilting downhill as it progresses. Can it be straightened out a bit? Also not sure this (hand drawn?) font is quite right, it's not that I think its bad, just not quite the look I am going for. Maybe something similar but a little looser feeling?
What if the "tripod" was the actual "A" in Andrews? That might be even better? Also can we try a few different versions of what the camera itself looks like? Just different styling of the camera and the little things flying out of the top of it? Also maybe a few different font options?
Hmmm. The "pictures" coming out don't really look like pictures to me. I think I actually like the other one better. Can you maybe try a few different versions? Also, can you move the "A" up a bit so it is sitting on the same plane as the rest of "Denise Andrews?" And maybe a different font for Photography, that one is looking a little boring to me. Especially since Denise Andrews is also in a simple font.
I think I like the original camera better. Also, still not totally 100% on the fonts, take a look at #15 in my tournament, I love the way "Andrews" is written. That is sort of the look I would like to see for the main font.