My board member said this: "Though I was wondering if this logo could possibly be created in patriotic colors—the black and white color scheme comes across as dreary and depressing when it should be positive and hopeful. And the text “A Home Away from Home For Wounded Soldiers” should maybe be slightly bigger—it’s a little hard to read." Can you do a variant for us?
Thank you for the ranking. Please feel free even in judging to let me know if there is anything I can change to make sure you are completely satisfied with the logo.
Kib, Can you do one more with no helmet...we like both the blue and the camo, without the eyeglass shade. Also, one option is to move the window over to the left and add some graphic so as to crate a flag effect on the house. We also need the verbiage to be bigger. We would like to work with you on this --- my email is kate.kohler@penfed.org. Kate