I ask you to please do the same job with the shades of green, starting with the shade of green that I uploaded in the Contest Attachments section. I ask you to start with that shade of green and move towards slightly lighter colors of green. It is not necessary to use darker shades of green.
Dear Cleo, starting from the shade of red I uploaded (see Contest Attachments), I ask you to show me the logo with different shades of red for the letter L and for the word "LAVORO".
I would like the slogan text colored dark blue (same shade of blue as the logo).
Dear Cleo, thanks for the great logos you have already made. Now we need to put all the good ideas together into one logo. Let's start with this logo and I ask you to add the following improvements:
1) to make the logo more symmetrical, I would like the thickness of the L and letter D to become the same. Currently if you notice the letter L is thicker than the letter D (final tab of the letter D at the bottom);
2) I ask you to round only the external corners: the letter L at the top left and the letter D at the bottom left. Also it is very important, in order for the logo to be symmetrical, I ask you to use an angle of curvature very very close to the one you used for the belly of the letter D.
3) I ask you to apply in this logo the arrow that you have already used in logo # 303 (external arrow with the same shade of blue as the letter D)
4) finally, in this logo I ask you to apply the anthracite gray that you have already used in the logos # 314 -> # 317;
Thank you so much Cleo it was very helpful to see the letter "L" in various colors. Here are my considerations:
1) my favorite color for the letter "L" is gray. And I would like you to darken the gray even more, for example with an anthracite-like shade.
2) I would like the final text ".it" in gray color.
3) Starting from this logo, following the improvements of the previous points one and two, I would like to see examples of logo with the arrow in various shades of blue.
Thank you so much Cleo I like the arrow you added.
I would like to see if the logo improves if we replace the dark gray color with another color (dark orange? light blue?) for the letter "L" and therefore also for the text "Lavoro".
Thank you very much and sorry for the many requests I ask you.
Cleo I added an image in the "Contest Attachments" section.
I added a smile arrow to your logo.
The problem is that it's Amazon's arrow and I don't think they'll be happy. Can you propose a logo starting from my idea?
Thanks so much.
Congratulations Cleo your work continues to be our favorite. We still ask you for some improvements:
1) some customers still criticized us for the swastika effect. If you can increase the size of the L and reduce the white space we can solve the problem.
2) about the colors we would like to see a darker shade of gray. The current shade of gray looks too 90s.
3) we would like to see the slightly larger ".it". We would like it to be clear that datorelavoro.it is an internet address.
The changes you have made to the text are perfect. Now the text is really elegant and we really like it.
Thank you.
1. Sorry can't make the letter "A" without the horizontal dash. Because some other designer already introduced it. It will break the rules in LT about respecting other designer ideas in the contest. But I tried to make different version of font treatment for A and E. Please see my updates #270#271#272#273.
Congratulations Cleo, we have chosen your image because it has a lot of potential, it is refined and elegant and it conveys the message that our mission is the health of workers.
At this stage we need you to make some changes to make your logo even cooler.
1) The most important thing we ask you to review is the style of the text and slogan. We would like the STYLE of the text and slogan to be more elegant. You can also try to edit a few letters creatively like the letter "A" without the horizontal dash. Finally we would like to see the letters "D" and "L" slightly in relief compared to the other letters.
2) Instead of the "|" we would like to see if the slogan becomes more beautiful using a small dot as a separator.
3) the colors you chose for the image are very beautiful. We would like to see if the image becomes even more beautiful by using some gradient effect.
We can't wait to see what you propose to us.
Thanks so much.
Dear Cleo, having seen the logo carefully, the design with the letter D unfortunately recalls the well-known image of the swastika. We would not like to be associated with this symbol. We ask you to do something to correct. Thank you.
Thanks Cleo, look at my markup to see what I meant as a "|" separator.
I would like to see a version of the logo with the text "DatoreLavoro" like this.
I like how you drew the ".it" at the end of a line, I wouldn't take it off. Thank you very much.
Cloe thank you so much for your work Cleo. It is very cool and is holding the first post in the ranking. We ask you to make the slogan a little more visible, perhaps by enlarging them and inserting a separator such as this "|" symbol between the words. Thank you.
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I ask you to please do the same job with the shades of green, starting with the shade of green that I uploaded in the Contest Attachments section. I ask you to start with that shade of green and move towards slightly lighter colors of green. It is not necessary to use darker shades of green.
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I would like the slogan text colored dark blue (same shade of blue as the logo).
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I have to choose whether to keep the arrow or whether to remove it. Can you show me how the logo improves with the arrow under the circle?
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4. I used the anthracite gray for all logo
5. I made the ".it" in blue to all logo
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1) to make the logo more symmetrical, I would like the thickness of the L and letter D to become the same. Currently if you notice the letter L is thicker than the letter D (final tab of the letter D at the bottom);
2) I ask you to round only the external corners: the letter L at the top left and the letter D at the bottom left. Also it is very important, in order for the logo to be symmetrical, I ask you to use an angle of curvature very very close to the one you used for the belly of the letter D.
3) I ask you to apply in this logo the arrow that you have already used in logo # 303 (external arrow with the same shade of blue as the letter D)
4) finally, in this logo I ask you to apply the anthracite gray that you have already used in the logos # 314 -> # 317;
Thanks so much.
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1) my favorite color for the letter "L" is gray. And I would like you to darken the gray even more, for example with an anthracite-like shade.
2) I would like the final text ".it" in gray color.
3) Starting from this logo, following the improvements of the previous points one and two, I would like to see examples of logo with the arrow in various shades of blue.
Thanks so much.
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I would like to see if the logo improves if we replace the dark gray color with another color (dark orange? light blue?) for the letter "L" and therefore also for the text "Lavoro".
Thank you very much and sorry for the many requests I ask you.
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I added a smile arrow to your logo.
The problem is that it's Amazon's arrow and I don't think they'll be happy. Can you propose a logo starting from my idea?
Thanks so much.
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3. Please see #292 #293 #294
4. Please see #295 #296 #297
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1) some customers still criticized us for the swastika effect. If you can increase the size of the L and reduce the white space we can solve the problem.
2) about the colors we would like to see a darker shade of gray. The current shade of gray looks too 90s.
3) we would like to see the slightly larger ".it". We would like it to be clear that datorelavoro.it is an internet address.
The changes you have made to the text are perfect. Now the text is really elegant and we really like it.
Thank you.
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1. Sorry can't make the letter "A" without the horizontal dash. Because some other designer already introduced it. It will break the rules in LT about respecting other designer ideas in the contest. But I tried to make different version of font treatment for A and E. Please see my updates #270 #271 #272 #273.
2. Please see my updates #270 #271 #272 #273.
3. Please see my updates #272 #273 with some gradient effect.
Thanks for understanding...
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At this stage we need you to make some changes to make your logo even cooler.
1) The most important thing we ask you to review is the style of the text and slogan. We would like the STYLE of the text and slogan to be more elegant. You can also try to edit a few letters creatively like the letter "A" without the horizontal dash. Finally we would like to see the letters "D" and "L" slightly in relief compared to the other letters.
2) Instead of the "|" we would like to see if the slogan becomes more beautiful using a small dot as a separator.
3) the colors you chose for the image are very beautiful. We would like to see if the image becomes even more beautiful by using some gradient effect.
We can't wait to see what you propose to us.
Thanks so much.
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I would like to see a version of the logo with the text "DatoreLavoro" like this.
I like how you drew the ".it" at the end of a line, I wouldn't take it off. Thank you very much.
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