Dassie IndustriesLogo Design Contest

Hi Heru

I like your chicken the best and I like the hair coming forward over the glasses. But I';m not 100% happy with it. I think the small spike on the back of the head should be going backwards and one strand coming forwrad over the eyes.

Could we try something like that?

ok. will do it soon

hi Heru

i actually prefer the original

maybe we could try going back to the original and and only having the back two spike on his head turning backwards?

i actually like #5 the nicest because it is simpler. but the name is going to change to Patriçiõ's, so I we will have to see how to fit it in.

I would also like to see the blck swish to flip[ around the vertical centre axis like there is in the #6, but without the top left part of the swish. maybe just a little coming out the top of his head but mainly the swish being bottom right (thick) to bottom left (thin)

Thanks

heru,

please see my general comment:


Guys, I like the chicken to have a neck and not to just sort of fade out. I like #9 for this but prefer the
neck in #2 and #1. I would like to work that into the chicken in #5-7. Th idea is that when I use just
the chicken without the text, then I can have a finite sketch and not something that just fades off.

I would love for you to add a neck to the chicken to "close it off" even if the left side of it is cut off by the text or the rest of the logo, i would like to have something for use when I use the chicken image alone.

Thanks

Hi Heru

thanks great job

i like #16 better than #15

what do you think about that?

can we try one with putting #16 into #14 with the the backwards hair like in #15 and with the neck as well.

I am really like the picture and the chicken is very cool.

Just need to work on the font - its not ideal.

in #14, i would also like to extend the black swish behind the head in the tope left - just a little tip, very thin, coming out so it looks like it is going around his head.

thanks

thanks heru

i like those two.

the blaxck slash is perfect

but im not happy about the trext

it may be thew colour scheme, but i think the style must be completely different (style of the text)

maybe a cursive? I dont know. It also needs to be more integrated into the logo, but definitely separable

thanks

ok. i'll give more variant with different style font.

Hi Heru

I like the new fonts but I think they are a bit too elegant and not 'fun' enough
see my new rankings for the fonts i prefer

thsnks

ok. i ll update soon

hi heru

check out ermin72's chicken. i prefer your chicken but i like the way he has done the neck

i would like a neck similar to that but sort of a mix between your one and his one with the large front part

thanks

ok

hi heru

we need to do some experimenting. your designs are my favourite but Im not happy about the text. look at juanm's texts

lets also work on the chicken and see if we can make some changes. its good but not perfect. want him to be more like a real chciken and less cartoony if that makes sense but still animated.

I am feeling the chicken looks too much like its a fast-food chicken place like KFC. need to make some changes to make him more of a mascot type person.

play with colours, surf boards etc and see if we can give him a body?

thanks a lot

ok. i'll update

hi heru

i like the designs with the surfboard.

could we try make the board a different colour? is that possible? like maybe the light orange colour used for some of the text, and then keep the text black, and use the same orange, or maybe a red to ornage fade for the Cio'? the way you did the colours of the cio' in the #67 is exaclty what i wanted.

I want to play around with the chicken now - could we make him thinnner? or give him shorts for #65?

just more variations for choice

thanks

ps i stil prefer the text that juanm is using in #41 - could we find something similar to that

ok

hio heru

#70 is great!

can we try with the cio part in white rather? solid white, no outline

thanks

also, i would like to see the picture with the chicken as in #65 with the blue shorts. Can we make them like a sarong? sort of like a skirt on him? thats what it looks like in number #70 although would look better is you could see the shorts co,ming through under the 'tri' text

thanks

ok

#71 is best - but can u make the sarong style of number #72 with the colour and effect and short lenght of the shorts in number 71?

then take that chicken and follow my last comments?

thanks

could we also try the font type of #70 in the font size of #67

hi heru

great work

i want to see #78 wihtout the text to see what the sarong looks like

i really like #78 and #80

with #80 could you try make the black from the squiggle under the 'ç' joing the swish, and the black from the " ' " before the " s " also join the swish to give a sort of line through the middle?

do you understand that?

please experiment with different colours and sizes according to what you feel

ok. this is a little confuse to me. but i'll try do it.
#81 wihtout the text
#82 orange surfboard and adding black line underneath.
#83 blue surfboard and adding black line underneath.
#84 same as #83 color reverse on text.

hope this is right.

:)
heru

Hi Heru

Thanks I see what youve done

Lets look at number #82

I did not mean to put that bottom swish in so take it out.

Now, giuve the chicken the blue shorts like in #71

Make the text Red and the cio' black and the big swish black.

now, thius is the important part! the apostrophe after the õ and before the s must be black, the 's' must be red.

can we try chanmging number #82 like this?

then as an additional change, for a seperate entry, please try join the bottom of the ç where the little tail comes off the c, with the big swish

do you understand ? not like that youve done with the small swish

thank man

take #85 and switch the black and the red with the TEXT ONLY, not the swish - and please put the apostrphe in black!!! thanks

like #80 but with the apostrophe black, the blue shorts instead of the sarong and orange surfboard

and can we try with the sun in the background? like in #65

hi heru

almost done! :)

please take #88 and #87 and make the S red! just the S! thanks

then can we try #88 and #87 both with a blue surfboard?

I think thats the last of the changes

ok

and can we try all those cominations but with switching the black and the red in the text and making the swish red

thanks heru

do #90 with the orange board - i think thats the one

don't worry i love this job