I like the fonts on #52 & #53 the best. Also, let's ee what he looks like full body. And with another with jacket, and turning into the words versus away.
We are almost there. Can we change his suit. The 2-tone on the jacket looks like a waiter, and you should never wear brown shoes and brown belt with a black suit. You could do cordovan in real life, but I think it's impossible to create that color on a cartoon and for people to recognize that color. :)) So let's go with black shoes and belt.
my apologize, i withdraw my entry number #77 and #78 (rank 1st and 2nd) because that is using RGB color mode, that's not good for printing, my mistakes.
i has changed entry number #77 and #78 with enty number #81 and #82 CMYK color mode.
We’re almost done :) #83 is what we want. A few changes: 1. The Smiley before and after "Keep Smiling" has to be computer code. So change it to exactly this
:)) Keep Smiling :))
2. Please make the 2 "D's in my name a little larger. I am talking about the "D"s in DARRYL DAVIS. This will make them seem more like Capital Letters
3. Try different color combo. We like the Red and Black together, but we need to see some other samples. Definitely no browns. Although I love Red and Blue, don’t use those together. Colors you can try: gold, light blue, dark blue, darker deep purple, red, black, and silver. I definitely would like to see these combos but whatever you want to try would be great:
Gold and Blue Gold and Red Blue and Silver Blue and Red
4. I would still love to see a unique font created. Entry #66 seemed to create a unique font in the "Keep Smiling". Walt Disney is so unique they don’t have a separate logo or different colors: http://www.groosy.com/wp-content/uploads/walt-disney-logo.png
OK here we go :) We WANT #83...with these changes: 1. You did make the "D"s in my name larger in #93...keep that. 2. The interlocking Ds in #93 has the Black on the bottom and Red on top...we want that combination 3. Use the :)) for the smiles 4. The word "seminars" in #93 is a little smaller than "seminars" in #83. We like the smaller version in #93
Once you make those changes to #83, then please give us a second sample of corrected #83, changing wherever you use Red with the same Blue that is in "Keep Smiling" with Submission #64 (another designer).
Once we finalize this, I'm closing the competition and you win.