#15 the writing is good but perhaps more boldness. The dancers are too ballroom specific we really want them to be leaning towards ballet dancers but could be anything really. Our preferred colour palette is cobalt blue and a rich earthy orange (Like stage footlights)
#15 Maybe an androgens Figure facing away from the writing , doing a back arch like a flamenco / ballet (arms stretched out over head) dancer, looking like they are lit from above and their shadow almost underlining the writing ?