Howdy :)
Your design has much merit! and has been talked about at length! I'll be honest and say as a committee, we are leaning towards the trellis and vine design by 'Sofiko' - it has "buy in"from the whole group so far. If you would like to try and improve on the current design - feel free to attempt a "D"version perhaps- as the committee seems to be sold on tying in Dalkeith with Disciple. Yet I understand if you need to save your time and effort to winning other contests! :) Really appreciate your entries!