Hi Pelys,
Thanks for your designs. I see you picked up on the do-something-with-the-font note I just gave with #11? :-) What is your idea about the L? It has no special meaning to me or the brand. The swooshy thingies on the D and A feel a little bit random. For instance: the logo of
http://www.bilderdeclercq.nl/ has a far more powerful feel to it. Not saying I want an exact copy of this logo, but if you want to go this way: make it unique and powerful for the brand Dabbawalla.