Thank you! I think I would like to delete my exclamation point at the end. Also maybe a dash of red/ pink or orange somewhere. I love the concept you are developing, maybe a little more detailed.
I'm glad that you like the concept:) Here is the revision as you suggested. If you have some other,suggestions or ideas please fell free to let me know. It will be my pleasure to make them for you.
Indigo, VERY professional-looking designs! Love them both-- will try to give feedback on each: #19 - I think, is still my favorite b/c of the simplicity and professional look. I really like the placement of the image next to the text. Would like "LLC" a little smaller and in script style. Does still need more "action" either in color or movement? (see #22, 20 comment) But I am afraid to mess with the image too much since I really like the simplicity and stability represented by the "tree"-- (?) #22 - I like the addition of color, but not sure I love the purple. I also like that the image appears to be more active. #20 - LOVE the action, but something about it isn't sitting well with me. I cannot tell if it's the circle or what, but I still like the concept and several of my friends/ family thought it to be the best design. #21 - I simply liked the line extension better as in #19 (shorter) and I am not liking the pink/ red "your" (I know, I asked for it, sorry) Thank you, again for all the time and thought that you are putting into my design. You are really talented and professional!
First of all let me thank you for the nice words and for the great feedback. I really appreciate it. Here is the update: #32 is the revision from #19 without exclamation point and with small "LLC" in script style. #33 is like #32 but with bigger line extension #34 with different movement and different color choices #35 revision on #22 #36 revision on #20
Let me know of your opinion. Hope you like it. Thank you!
Thank you for all the revisions, Indigo! #35 - LOVE the new color added! But you were right about the "llc" not being in script. Added a seriousness, that I now miss-- maybe just a little smaller. #32,33 - I still like the tree to the left, just needs that punch of color you added to #35. I prefer the shorter line, but I am about to ask to add the word "Real" in front of Nutrition to make a stronger statement, so to fit it all, we may need that longer line style (unless you have other ideas for fitting it w/ the shorter line) #34 - not crazy about the speed swirl affect (I know you were adding motion, I appreciate that), but like the colors, of course. #36 - Still not my favorite, but gives me an idea... Would it be possible to show the "tree/ man" of #32 or 33 or 36 in slightly more action-- as if he's reaching up, slightly? If you think it looks funny when you play w/ it, then leave it back to where it is now. Just a thought. I really appreciate that you encorporated all of my requests! Thank you!
For the revisions on the "tree/ man", I will work on it and submit revisions. In the meantime if you have any suggestions or require revisions please feel free to let me know
Great job, Indigo! Thank you for all of these revisions-- Loving #39 and #37! I like that slightly muted/ mottled effect of the color on #37. Let me know how the tree/ man revision works out. Also, would like to see what #39 would look like w/ slightly more muted colors (same colors, only softened a bit) No rush-- I'll check back in the late am tomorrow. Very impressed!
Thanks, Indigo! #49, #52 - I like the more upward-reaching of the "arms", but I still like the colors of #39 best. I like the way you shaded/ faded the leaves on #19, maybe that would soften the colors without the mottled effect. I guess I like the smoothness of the solid colors. I think I do like that curve on #52 Also, I would like "LLC" de-emphasized in some way (smaller/ under Cult.Health/ ?) Thank you for honoring all of these requests!
Here is the update: #86 I think I find the best "LLC" placement for this design :) Let me know of your opinion regarding the colors, I have change the green to more grass green. If you have any other suggestions or ideas please feel free to let me know
#90 - Yes- love the placement for llc and the image in the center of the title! Would you try a slightly darker green at the bottom of the tree fading lighter as it moves up? Also, could you stretch the tree trunk up slightly, to make it a little taller and slimmer and more of a "reach" by the human aspect? For the slogan below, I'd like to see that in a brownish-grey, to simulate the ground, but still be neutral.
Thank you! That last revision really did the trick for placements!
Here is the revision based on your feedback: #125 I have also made another concept for your consideration. I have made the human tree differently, now it is reaching for an apple (organic food) #126 and as you can see it also goes perfectly on dark background #127. Let me know of your opinion and if you have any suggestions please feel free to let me know
Wow, they are lovely! #126 - Love the new idea! #125 - Thank you for the revision. Is it possible to keep the same font (or as close as possible), but to make the "H" in Health with not so sharp angles? Softer H? I would like to see "Health" in the same color you used in #38 (but I like the shading you have in #126) Also, LLC slightly larger. Thank you!
I am very glad you like it :) Here is the revision based on your feedback: #128 and #129 with changed letter "H" in word health. #130 and #131 with capitalize "Nutrition" and "Body" #132 is like #131 but with brown tree. Comments appreciated and if you have other suggestions please feel free to let me know
#130 - Thank you! I really appreciate you trying all those different looks and colors. I like the new "H". I'm sorry, I meant to only capitalize the first letters of Nutrition and Body (not all caps;) Is there a way to slightly tone down the red or mute it (only slightly, though)? Thanks!
Orange is nice, too, thank you for trying that-- but I think the apple is my favorite Last requests: #134 - back to your original apple color (you were right:) #135 - "YOUR" in green, also.