..just uploaded #6 using italics and leaving off the bubbles. The bubbles were a way to kinda symbolize data leaving/entering the cloud, but no worries :)
Ray, thanks for all your great work. we are getting there!
I think there is some optimization to be done on the shape of the cloud. I created some feedback decks. Please find them here: let me know when you're having an issue opening the files
Ray, great stuff !! I believe there was a misscommunication regarding the blue, I would prefere the color blue same as # 11, so enry #19 but with blue from #11
Ray, looking in details at your great collection. what do you think of #17 in the lighter blue and make to right side of the cloud just "go around" the "o" ? thoughts? (cloud with the "bumps" below might be more realistic)
..just uploaded #39, i added a 'fast stripe' to the cloud, lost the little bobble at the left of the cloud, and also highlighted the G a little more :)
..quote from fellow designer "love 39, it looks like a bike from Tron pulling a wheelie, you can seriously tell speed is involved" - lol, it kinda does though in my eyes now ive been told it !! :)
Ray, thanks for #39 - removing the little bobble on the left is a great tweak, it looks much slicker now! I am still not sure If I like the flat button part of #21 better than #39.
could you also create a version of #21 where you remove / decrease the little bobble on the left? this would be great. having the two word crm and 2go closer together looks more compact / solid I believe.
maybe it's my eyes being tired from looking to long at your great work, question in #49 are the two words crm and 2Go exactly aligned? look to me that the 2Go is a px or 2 higher . thoughts?
thanks also the bottom left "corner" of the number "2" should not be too close to the edge of the cloud (could be dangerous being to close to the edge of the cloud ;-)) lol)
..i sleep very little ;) - well around 6hrs per night - the rest of the time im a 'designer' , if im not by my PC, i have got my HTC to alert me to e-mails :)
"maybe it's my eyes being tired from looking to long at your great work, question in #49 are the two words crm and 2Go exactly aligned? look to me that the 2Go is a px or 2 higher . thoughts?"
#56 looks also good. could you make another version with the "fast stripes" bolder / wider (more triangle like) I think in #56 the stripes look quite skinny.
great, looks good!!!! - which one would you rate number No 1? now I have to get some sleep. it has been a great collaboration! fun and efficient. thanks!