Thanks so much for your submission! Love the general idea. Here are a few thoughts and ideas:
Really like
#3, so these comments are based on that design.
-really like "wish music" - great color, font and movement (and incorporation of the staff)
-could you please try crescendo in a different font? the lower case letters seem a bit hard to read, and I would like to see the word crescendo have a different feeling than "with music." Could we try a bolder stronger look?
Thanks so much!
Best,
Gabby