Here's a quick revision. I've tried to stay away from web 2.0 effects to give you a clear idea of what the logo would look like in print. It can always be developed further from here, depending on how it will be used. I think it conveys the concepts of working together, success, communication, and, of course, creativity and growth. Thanks for considering my design.
Hi and thank you for your revisions. I really, really like your design for all of the imagery and the concepts it convey. I would like to ask for one more revision to the slogan. I know it would make the slogan longer, but could we make the slogan as follows: improving organizational and individual effectiveness
Thank you. I will be making my decision in under 2 hours. Thanks again for your work.
I would have liked to have found more time to improve on this for you, but hopefully you've seen enough of the potential of this design concept to make your final decision. I would of course be available to you during the judging phase to refine this to your complete satisfaction if you are interested.