Items #249 and
#250 look a little too much like worms. I think the idea of the face may not be working. The threads of the bulb also lead to this feeling. can you try another version?
Also on
#170 can to try to make less busy, by removing the lies above the i and some of the sparkles. also, please experiment with other sketch line options (that the child is drawing) and possible moving the child to one side or the other (not in the middle). Thanks,