I know you are plenty creative without my comments, but other modification ideas I thought "might" improve are:
1. maybe if the scanners color became a shade closer to the color of one of the font colors
2. maybe the "IN" gets slanted forward a little (italics look) that might make the scanning look more dimensional.
These are just afterthoughts and might not improve, just give consideration.
I have you in first place right now, so I think you should be able re-submit your modifications.
I'm going offline and will return in 10 hours.
Thanks,
Andrew