Can you move the leave a little more to the right so the stem is centered above the "I" in Fi? You are the winner, but I would appreciate this small change
also first dot over i in Vital needs to start closer to to the top of i in Vital. Possible at the same level as top/cross of the t in Vital. and once again make leaf more consistent to your latest design currently ranked in no. 1 position (proper spacing)
Last change and i will make you the winner. Please move the leaf a bit up and to the right so the bottom of the leaf is more in line with the dots and most of the leaf is off to the right
additional comments:
1. can you confirm the bubbles are grey while over the word Vital and then green once transition over Fi
2. can you create a bit more spacing between last bubble over F in Fi. It appears too close to the top of the letter F.
Pls see my comment on your other one. I like the bubbles and leaf on the other. This one is also not centered on the "i". Needs to have a bubbles getting a little bigger and bigger leaf
I moved my favorite one you did to rank 1. I like the bubble size and leaf size of this one better, but I only want one leaf (the bigger one) and delete the small one.
Logo is getting closer. See below additional edits
1. Reduce spacing between "l" in vital and "F" in Fi. It needs to appear as one word.
2. Delete green dot over "i" in Fi and replace with green leaf angled at 45% over "i". Make sizing of leaf consistent with your increasing bubble pattern. Leaf is a subtle accent. Not intended to draw undue attention away from Company Name. Good example of green leaf is found in link below https://goo.gl/images/xK5P6m
3. Can you also create a logo version with similar font style found in logo link below? https://goo.gl/images/C55w54
I can ready to do ...change my rank to 1 temporary so that i can submit...as per logo tournament rules only rank 1 designer can submit in selection phase...thats why if u change my rank to 1 temporary i can submit
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Here is the final result we are going for. If you are not able to do this as I know they are significant changes, pls let me know and we will ask another designer as we only $$ to do this once.
1. Update font per comment above
2. have the bubbles start in a very small size similar to your and then progressively get bigger as it falls over the "i" in Fi; similar concept shape to umbrella arc found in Citibank logo as you have it
3. make the bubbles grey color
4. make the "i" in Fi a green leaf.
Concept here is the arc symbolizes the connection between word Vital and Fi; and the progressively larger bubbles signifies emergence of growth springing forth from the word Vital and resulting in a green leaf or product meaning Fi.
Would like to see it in this color coordination and then another version with the word Vital in green and Fi in grey. Bubbles are grey and leaf over i in Fi remains green.
Done - look forward to seeing what you can do. I have a meeting with my partners this afternoon and would be good to show them update for final options among finalists. Thanks!!!
I am ready to do all the modification. But i cannot submit it now since the contest in selection phase only ranked one designer can submit. You can rank my design to first and allow me to submit the modification and can change the rank as per you like later. Thank you hope you understand.
I am choosing a finalist in three hours. I would love to see this as follows:
The "Vital" in dark grey
The "Fi" in a nice green color
The dots from the "i" on Vital are grey and stay grey until they reach the dot on the "i" on "Fi." The final dot above on the "i" should be green. All grey dots and one green one
I would like to stay with 2 colors here. Perhaps green and grey. Maybe "Fi" can be dark grey and bolder and the "vital" be Green with the dots going from one "I" to the next "I" in green as well
I like this, but can you center the last bubble of the "i". Would also like to have a few different color options. I don't love the simple blue and black
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Congrats! Can you please provide the specifications for the FONT and the COLOR PALLET USED FOR THE GREY AND GREEN COLORS?
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1. can you confirm the bubbles are grey while over the word Vital and then green once transition over Fi
2. can you create a bit more spacing between last bubble over F in Fi. It appears too close to the top of the letter F.
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1. Please delete smaller leaf, which is pointing down.
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1. Reduce spacing between "l" in vital and "F" in Fi. It needs to appear as one word.
2. Delete green dot over "i" in Fi and replace with green leaf angled at 45% over "i". Make sizing of leaf consistent with your increasing bubble pattern. Leaf is a subtle accent. Not intended to draw undue attention away from Company Name. Good example of green leaf is found in link below
https://goo.gl/images/xK5P6m
3. Can you also create a logo version with similar font style found in logo link below?
https://goo.gl/images/C55w54
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Try to change the font also as modern.
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Here is the final result we are going for. If you are not able to do this as I know they are significant changes, pls let me know and we will ask another designer as we only $$ to do this once.
1. Update font per comment above
2. have the bubbles start in a very small size similar to your and then progressively get bigger as it falls over the "i" in Fi; similar concept shape to umbrella arc found in Citibank logo as you have it
3. make the bubbles grey color
4. make the "i" in Fi a green leaf.
Concept here is the arc symbolizes the connection between word Vital and Fi; and the progressively larger bubbles signifies emergence of growth springing forth from the word Vital and resulting in a green leaf or product meaning Fi.
Would like to see it in this color coordination and then another version with the word Vital in green and Fi in grey. Bubbles are grey and leaf over i in Fi remains green.
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http://www.herbalife.com/
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The "Vital" in dark grey
The "Fi" in a nice green color
The dots from the "i" on Vital are grey and stay grey until they reach the dot on the "i" on "Fi." The final dot above on the "i" should be green. All grey dots and one green one
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