Thanks for the revision, and paying attention to my instructions to use our current logo, with the exception of the graphic! Re. the graphic: We do not want the black box. And- it needs to be more like the water droplet layout used in the submission I ranked as #1. No need for including the pipe in the graphic.
Thanks again and I look forward to your next revision!
RE. Entry # 21: Mark, FANTASTIC work! Let's focus on this one. Please add an "&" in front of the word, "Plumbing," and use the same style as the ampersand in our current logo. Also- to give the owner an additional option to this version, please re-create to only have one, bulging water droplet, similar to the entry that I ranked as #1. I want the owner to see what you already have with this entry (i.e., the pool of droplets...), but- he really likes the "one droplet" idea.
Again, I LOVE your work! Looking forward to seeing your revisions!
RE. Entry # 22: I really like this one, too! Suggested revisions: Change the slant of "& Plumbing Too!" from left downward, to left upward.. i.e., so that the word, "Too!" looks as if it's pointing to the word, "Conway" in the logo. Also- change the verbiage to black, bold. Also-
As I commented above, on entry #21: I'd also like to see a revision of this, with only one water droplet... I really like your 'pool of droplets' concept, but we need to show the owner this version with only one water droplet.
Made the revisions on the #2 ranked. The spalsh with the "&" added before plumbing. And a "Leaking" droplet with the words from bottom to top facing the company name.
Wow, Mark, I see you've been really busy.. And they're all looking so good, it's getting hard to decide which is best. :-) Ok... Focusing on #40, just a couple more tweaks: Remove the white outline from around the verbiage, "& Plumbing Too!" so that it's just bold black, and lessen the shadow around the droplet, just a little! And- blend the white spot in the droplet to look more like a reflection (hopefully, that makes sense?) AND-
Re. # 36:Move the graphic and verbiage down, just a little, plus add just a hair's space between the droplets and the verbiage, so they're not so close. This will help to center/balance it more with the "Conway" logo. Re. the verbiage: Please darken the red/bold that you used, i.e., match the red used in our logo, or- maybe, go even a little darker.
Thanks again for ALL of your great work. I really believe it's going to come down to one of the two above. Hopefully, you'll be able to make the above-mentioned revisions quickly, as I'll be showing these to the owner, in the morning.
GREAT! Thanks for the quick revisions. Re. #48... I'm wondering... Do you think the "& Plumbing Too!" might stand out more, if it's in red bold, or- perhaps lightening the actual water droplet? *** I think lightening it (setting a transparency value...) needs to be done.*** If you would:
Lighten the droplet.. Then, revise to use black bold (the verbiage..), as you currently have it, and- a version with the droplet lightened, plus- use red bold.
PERFECT!!! Thanks, Mark. I'll be meeting with the owner to go over these, this afternoon. As soon as I have his input, I will re-rank, based on his preferences.
Hi Mark! Can I get you to make another modification to Entry #47? The owner would like to see this with the verbiage above the splash... Plus, change the verbiage to, "Now Plumbing TOO!" The sooner the better, and THANKS! (NOTE: We took a vote in our office as to employee preference, and the splash logo is winning!)
As requested i made 4 revisions with the splash. Took the liberty to make a couple of lining variations on the verbiage, but you will see that quickly enough offcourse.
Great, Mark! Re. entries 70 - 72, can we see these with the text in black? Not that the red text is out just yet, but- the owner wants to see these with black text as well.
Mark, one final note: It's hard to tell from your designs, but- your graphic needs to fit within the parameters of the 'old' box graphic, size-wise. Reason being: When this portion of the graphic is replaced on all 20+ of our trucks, it will have to "fit" over the old box graphic, and we won't have any wiggle-room, so to speak, for a larger graphic.
Hopefully, this makes sense? If not, please send me an email at: tanya@conwayservices.net
Oh, my! Mark! I just LOVE this one, too. I'm supposed to get with the owner, this afternoon to go over these, so- I DEFINITELY will be showing him this one as well :-)
Mark, regarding yur new submission, #86: In looking at your other ones, I noticed that the droplets are outlined, which helps to define them more, I think. Would you please do something similar to this one? But- be sure to leave a copy of the current one, so we'll have something to compare it to.
Re. #84: Mark, could you increase the size of the text to be the same as is in 76, and then curve the word "Plumbing" up some? I think we'll be OK if the verbiage portion goes a little outside/above the paremeters of the original box graphic.