#34, I like the simplicity of the logo but the font is too simplistic. When you look at the font/words alone it doesn't stand out. I'm thinking at least untill the company is fortune 500 that the lettering should be unique. Think like Oakley when they hit the scene. I'm not saying to copy thier lettering, not at all, but something that sets it apart from other company names. Also with the logo portion, if you could try adding residential into it... I'm not sure how, but I would be interested in what you could come up with.
Hi, I just uploaded 3 different fonts for your review. Will work on incorporating residential into it, if that doesn't work I may submit a different design.. thanks.
I'm liking #50 and the #49 but this is pending on seeing them on a black background. I think the logo is stronger in #50 and font stonger in #49. What if you created a hybrid font out of those two fonts and took the logo in #50 and stylized the bottom and sides. I'm thinking the box look that you currently have limits this logo and it could be even more expressive if you used the bottom and sides as you have done the top. Or some combination there of, like the top and bottom and left the sides the way they are? I don't know but I do know I like how you incorporated the residential aspect, very good!
Hi, thanks for your feedback! I think I get what you mean.. herein the design on black background for your review first #59. Pardon I have to sign off now, will work on your idea and font tomorrow morning (GMT+8).
#82 and #81 are ok, I like the font a lot, but the logos lost something. I'm not sure how to fix it, but they got a little too complicated to be able to tell what is going on at first glance. Maybe if you joined the houses together at the bottom or something? Also, I like the single color on the black background, but I would like to see the three color logo on the black backgound as well.
Thanks! I think you just need to define the structures a little better. Right now you see the roof of the houses but it's hard to tell the sides and the bottom the skyscrapers behind also need a little more definition. I think if you can get it to look like houses and skyscrapers, but still keep it simple, clean and art nuevo like you already have done, I'd say it's a winner.
Thanks again for your comment, I have added the details to the design for your review #111 and #112.. did a 2D version of the similar design as well #113 and #114.
There are 7 days for refinement once the contest has ended, you can switch among designers during this period because only the 1st ranked can upload design during this period.. just fyi :)
Thanks ordmode! I still like #81 out of all the ones you have created since, but it's just missing something... I don't know if that the buildings sides do not match the shadow sides or what, but I really like what you have, it just doesnt read cleanly.