Fish is high on detail but outline, back and chest, short share, too abstract. again i like your technique, but please look at fish proportions. It has to be crear that is not carp, its a gold fish.
Head look like carp. I think it is important to get proportions right. Look at the goldfish image in the brief. technique looks good. It has to swim to the left.
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Can you try again. Fins need work but I like your technique.
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