Thank you for all the variations. They're helping us out a lot. Here's our next request for a tweak...
We're still thinking this is a little busy. Could it be simplified a bit more by:
- instead of three leaves in the left section, could it be a single leaf / stem?
- instead of the microscope on the right, could that be the lab flask?
- in the middle section — we like the way that the lines flare outward to define that shape... could that area be represented by the DNA helix alone, with the lines that flare out at the top being a part of the DNA helix as it replicates / zips / unzips — I hope that makes sense.
Could we see this version of the hex icon - but without the water drop, since water is reflected in the bottom of the hex. As in the top portion of #119 and #120
Hi, here there is the version of the logo ranked first now #118, but with the laboratory flask instead the dna strand. With the smaller font for COMSTOCK and ACADEMY and I changed a little bit the icon of the microscope to not touch the white border, and be inside the blue rectangle, like #155
Hi, here there is the version of the logo ranked first now #118, but with the smaller font for COMSTOCK and ACADEMY and I changed a little bit the icon of the microscope to not touch the white border, and be inside the blue rectangle.
Hi, not problem... I sent some variations for your evaluation, with the logo ranked first now... if you want to use this one with the laboratory flask and some of the variations, just let me know.
Nice detail work. I'd like to see another version with the words "Comstock" and "Academy" in a smaller font size. This might make the overall mark and lettering wider than it currently is, but I think it would be good to see that.
Liking this one better than #125 - this feels more balanced. When the water drop is added to the left side, the right side feels off balance — but this is all about balance because we don't necessarily want to add too many design elements and make the image too busy!
Liking this... could we put the gear back into the middle section at the bottom - above the water - and maybe move the helix and water drop up? lose the sun?
We're really liking this. The text may be in need of some changes, but we can get to that...
Hi, I tried to follow your instructions, trying to keep the same logo, but with less elements and better distribution, all the elements are more visible and "clean".
Also comment that I tried to use a layout inside the circle or now inside the hexagon, trying to represent an abstract building/school, with different "departments" or sections for different STEM representations, and the land or water below... with also the subliminal arrow pointing up to represent the success or advance.
Hi, Thanks for the feedback !
I sent some revisions.... trying to be less busy, one with the original colors and others with just the blues, without the "slogan", and also with the gear bigger, smaller and without... and moving the elements trying to be not too much busy but keeping the feeling of the logo.
Hi,
This logo is versatile and adaptable to various applications (multi-purpose). Here's the one-color version... It's particularly useful for merchandise, engraving (metal or wood), screen printing (serigraphy), laser cutting, and other applications.
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Even that I see looking at the new attachments that you already decided go to another idea. Was a pleasure.
Best Regards,
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We're still thinking this is a little busy. Could it be simplified a bit more by:
- instead of three leaves in the left section, could it be a single leaf / stem?
- instead of the microscope on the right, could that be the lab flask?
- in the middle section — we like the way that the lines flare outward to define that shape... could that area be represented by the DNA helix alone, with the lines that flare out at the top being a part of the DNA helix as it replicates / zips / unzips — I hope that makes sense.
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Bests Regards,
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Bests Regards,
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Thanks again!
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I added again the gear, I moved the drop above the plant and I made the sun slightly small... just for your evaluation.
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here the sun is gone, I added again the gear
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We're really liking this. The text may be in need of some changes, but we can get to that...
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Also comment that I tried to use a layout inside the circle or now inside the hexagon, trying to represent an abstract building/school, with different "departments" or sections for different STEM representations, and the land or water below... with also the subliminal arrow pointing up to represent the success or advance.
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I sent some revisions.... trying to be less busy, one with the original colors and others with just the blues, without the "slogan", and also with the gear bigger, smaller and without... and moving the elements trying to be not too much busy but keeping the feeling of the logo.
Bests Regards,
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Thank you for this revision!
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Not problem for the changes... I will send asap.
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Any chance you could revise something like this while incorporating a hexagon rather than a circle?
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This logo is versatile and adaptable to various applications (multi-purpose). Here's the one-color version... It's particularly useful for merchandise, engraving (metal or wood), screen printing (serigraphy), laser cutting, and other applications.
Bests Regards,
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