I like your images alot. In both #13 as well as #2, the letters are more creative and not as obvious that the are a D and a C. I think I prefer that. I like the image in #13 the best, I like that it is softer. It is hard to put into words what I would like to see enhanced, but I could best describe it as "less simple." I prefer having detail included and using a bit more color, either split between the two colors or with the green being the predominant color and a bit more subtle use of the dark burgandy. Thank you so much for your diligent work on this logo, I really appreciate it.
Thank you so much. Everyone who has seen the logos iso far s very drawn to yours, both of them.(#19 & #2)...I have heard several times from people who are close to me..."There is something about those Exodus versions...they stand out." I feel the same way. I feel that your image is the most creative, or distinctive. I especially like the curves in the latest version of the #19 mark. Even though I like this version so much, I am not artistic enough to explain what it is that is keeping it at #3, even though I prefer it...I would love to try to explain it though because I think yours has the most potential of representing me. The best way I can describe it is perhaps by asking if there is a way to add a little more detail and or color to the other parts of the logo (not the mark necessarily), whether it is something underneath the company name (before the tag line), an artistic line underneath or something else, color behind it, etc... I am just not sure. I wish I was better at explaining it than I am. However, I can tell you have your own ideas, which are far better than what I can convey that would fit better with the mark you have created. I know for you it needs to tie into the exisitng design, and I agreee. I think if it just had a few more details and a bit more color, it would help me. I wish you knew me and this would be easier :). If I think of better ways to describe this later today, I will post another comment. Thank you for listening and for your patience with me.
adding a line between company name and tagline. thank you so much for the kind words. we'll keep working until we find something! this option is simple enough, yet more than just a line that it adds an element of distinction to the logo. i will continue to brainstorm on ways to make it stand.
changing the layout offers the opportunity to use the line to represent increased communication. as the name gets bolder, so goes the line of communication.