Common Senses LLCLogo Design Contest

I have revised my design according to your direction, please check it ,I will work for you, until you get the design you want, thanks

Would also love to see the bird in a more upright position similar to your angled rendition of the bird. Thank you!

thank you for choosing me as a finalist,
I have revised my design according to your direction, please check it, if there is a problem with my design, please contact me, I will work for you, until you get the design you want, thanks again,
regards

Meaning I like the more vertical position of the bird

I like the way this bird is positioned, but prefer the fluid rendering of the bird. Can you make it that way?

I'm not really getting "playful" from this font :-) Can you show me more options?

Hmmm... wings should come from shoulders, beak should be long and thin like your other entry. love your colors!

I like the colors on the bird, maybe a more casual? playful? font?