Entry # 48 is super. I would really like to make our tag line a bit bigger. Perhaps bring it on the outside of the coloring and make it orange in color. Make the tag line larger. Lets take a look at that.
i would like to see entry 48 without the orange outline as well. Make umbrella yellow and perhaps a different front for the tag line. try all caps for the tage line. Make color of tag line orange. i thing that would look really nice.