Thank you so much for your entry! Your logo really is nice in the way that it is simple yet powerful. Some quick critiques would be:
1. Please don't make the s in bold as it makes it look like we are clevers hoppers.com instead of clevershoppers.com
2. We love the smiley face icon yet we would like to see three other options for icons that you can come up with.
3. It would be nice if you could come up with a logo as well that isn't dependent on our tag line to be there (this is something we are wanting to not have in the future all the time)
One thing that I would recommend doing is going back and looking at our contest brief again as we just updated it to tell a little more about who we are and our story. Thanks again for your submission!
Thank you so much for continuing to push this! I love different parts of #41 and #40. It would be nice to see the ideas singled out so that they become simpler.
In saying this what I mean is:
It would be nice to see the logo with just the light bulb icon and normal text and without shoppers being bolded. Maybe the light bulb could either be on top of clevershoppers or to the left of clevershoppers with normal text.
It would be nice to also see one version where it's just the clevershoppers.com with the check mark for the v but nothing behind it and without our slogan.
Hey thank you so much for continuing to push yourself and to push the limits. What we would like to do to come up with a finalized logo would be a couple of things:
1. We do not like the icy blue that you are using in #39 #40 or #41 for the word clever in the slogan. We would like to keep the color to maximum three colors (one of these colors being black). What we would love to see now as we wrap the logos up... would be to see #39 with the typeface that you are using in #40. Also if you wouldn't mind playing with the line width in #39 of the smiley face to make it a little more like that of the line length in #40. Possibly not as thin as #40 but some where in between those two logos. The other way that we would like to see these two logos combined would be to take the v from #40 and put it in the v in #39 to see how that looks.
2. In #41 we would like to see the word clever in #FFFFFF instead of the cream color that you are using. As well as the color of the word clever in the slogan changed to a color that accents the blue in the light bulb more naturally (if not the color that is actually inside the light bulb)
Thank you again so much for your hard work! You are doing a great job!
We've narrowed it down to #63. You have done a great job so far and there are just a few minor tweaks that we would like to see happen to it to finalize it.
Version #1: If you could make the line width around the outer circle the same or just a tiny bit bigger than the line width in that of the bolded word clevershoppers and then the inner lines the same of that of shoppers. Also in this version could you please un-bold the word clever within the slogan.
Version #2: If you could make the line width around the outer circle the same or just a tiny bit bigger than the line width in that of the bolded word clevershoppers and then the inner lines the same of that of shoppers.
Version #3: Could you please un-bold the word clever within the slogan.
Thank you so much! Also just out of curiosity why did you choose the smiley face as the icon? We love it but would love to hear why you thought of that when you thought of clevershoppers?
My reason for choosing this icon smile, a smile is a symbol of a positive attitude and a positive attitude is an act of clever people. All concerned about the results done with clever process would make us happy and smiling.That my opinion :)
Love what you have going on in #70 could you please bring the curves of the smile to make it look like it's a more distinct happy smile like you had before in the thicker stroke? Also could you please make the s in shoppers not bold as it's reading clevers hoppers again. We don't want that :). Thanks so much again for the hard work!
Also going along with #71 could you please just take the bold out of the slogan so there's not bold words anywhere so we can see what that looks like? Thanks!
Thanks so much for letting us see those. The last thing that we would like for you to do is this:
In logos #74 #75 and $76 with the smiley moved over so that the . in .com is in the center of the smiley face to appear like it is a nose. Thanks again for all your hard work!