- We really like the separation between "Clarkson Centre" and "Board Effectiveness" for this type of design (although could you put the british spelling of "Centre")
- could we see an example that uses some slightly darker fonts (I don't know if bolder is the right word because we don't really want the letters thicker)
- we do like the differentiation in colour between the top and bottom lines but could you put a tiny bit more emphasis on the difference
- could you also put a little bit more space around the "for" in the middle (raise and lower the top and bottom lines)?
We think entry #7 is more appropriate for our uses than entry #8
Thank you very much for the new submissions. They look really good.
We like the changes to #9, but now that it's a bit taller, could you also stretch it a little bit more horizontally? (We really liked the width-to-height ratio of the original but just wanted a little more space for the words)
For #14, we really like the emblem you've used but I think it might be too big relative to the words. We prefer the layout of #13 but could we see that layout with the emblem from #14?