Sebastian, this is really great! I really like the prominence of the word "Clarkson" and the split between the emblem and the org name. I will get back to you with more specific/critical comments once I have more submissions to compare with. Thank you very much for your submission. I will be in touch soon.
I just had some more thoughts on entry #1. The things I really like about this design are: - the font - the colour - the dividing lines - the overall layout of the words and the emblem
We're hoping you can rework the emblem. A couple pieces of feedback regarding the emblem have been: - could you try an emblem with a different shape so we could see what it looks like - would you have any ideas for an emblem with an abstract design rather than letters? - maybe also try some different positioning for the letters in the emblem
At this point this is still our favourite submission. We're just hoping we can see some other ideas.
Those are great submissions. We prefer the colours in the emblem on #11 over #12. However, it reminds us too much of a setting sun which makes me think of a retirement company or something similar. Could you try rotating the emblem for #11 90 degrees so that it kind of looks like a "C"?
For Entry #10, could we see the same logo with softer corners? We're also not entirely sold on the positioning of the letters within the emblem.