Clarity in YogaLogo Design Contest

Hi! Thanks for feedback!

nice but we have to choose amongst all the nice ones you produced! Out is hard to say goodbye to some of these! Same comment about outer petals of lotus. Not sure why the star over the "I" doesn't seem to work. We thought it would. It seems like the text and the font are too far separated from each other. But really, we are just putting words to vague feelings here. We like your colors...would like to see a gradient in the lotus.

nice but we have to choose amongst all the nice ones you produced! Out is hard to say goodbye to some of these! Outermost petals could be more like the middle petals with a little swoop at the end to express more vibrancy/vitality, upliftment.

nice but we have to choose amongst all the nice ones you produced! Out is hard to say goodbye to some of these!

This is the one we like best of this series with the stars of semi-circle above the lotus and the text not integrated into the lotus stem

This one and the other one with the two red stars are our favorites of this series.

see other comments for font, stem & lotus

see other comments for font, stem & lotus

Wow! You really read our suggestions and came up with the "I" becoming the stem of the lotus and possibly being a path. Teal color could lean more towards the blue side than green. We think that a cursive font like this is not going to work for our purposes - we are afraid that it isn't legible enough (clear enough). Same comment for the other permutations of this font, stem & lotus.

Nice logo! Surprisingly to me, We like the stars on the outside better.