Clarity in YogaLogo Design Contest

Thank you for your beautiful, interesting, creative design. I didn't know how to suggest to make it better. Best to you.

Can we see this with a semi-circle above and maybe below too? A semi-circle was part of my original specification so it was my idea. The lotus may need to be adjusted in size.

Better font!

Much better! We like all the colors and the openness of the image. The font is not bad but could be a little better; a font that is clear, slim, open, legible but has just a little more personality and expressiveness of yoga. For instance, a font that would have a slight curve to the upper two arms of the "Y" in yoga.

not sure what the difference is between this and #76?

Text is lighter but still not the font we are looking for. We are looking for a sans serif font (or very light serif) that has some bend in the letter "Y". Than you for removing the obvious figure of the person. We don't mean to put you entirely off a person figure - just not a realistic representation of a person. Something highly stylized would be ok or nothing at all is also ok. The lotus within the lotus within the lotus idea is interesting and does express a kind of radiation. Perhaps it is a bit too busy? All in all this is closer to what we are looking for than the previous design so good work!

text is heavier than the similar design so we will go with that one over this one.

We prefer the multicolored petals and non-black text. The font looks a bit heavy - we're looking for a thinner, more open font that is still legible. We prefer a gradient of colors in the design - not just solid colors.

The figure is better in this one and the similar one but my wife just doesn't want a figure. My wife does not want black text. We prefer the multicolored petals.

Though the figure is better in this one and the similar one, my wife just doesn't want a figure. The colored text that is not black is better than the black text. We prefer the multicolored petals.

Sorry, that was knees up in the air. My wife and I were discussing your design and we think the Clarity in Yoga should be in something other than black. The black seems too strong and heavy to us. Perhaps one of the other colors form the lotus.

We like the spectrum of colors. Clarity in Yoga stands out nicely so is very legible which is good. We like where the color intersect to form other colors. Not as thrilled with the person figure especially with the need looking like they are up and tight. Not sure what else would go in there. Aum symbol or ??? Perhaps the tag could be in a different color - one of the colors form the petals

Cool positive/negative design but looks more like a genie than a yogi.