If you would like to see any variations on any of my entries (colors, fonts, adjustments, additions, subtractions or just suggestions) please let me know. Would be happy to do.
#65- We like the insinuation of the arrow to the puzzle globe. One suggestion is to maybe have one piece of the puzzle slightly askew so it looks like the arrow is pushing the final piece to the puzzle in place.
#59- Like the overall concept. Can we keep the person talking icon but make the others a truck, a bike, a small plane and boat? I would recommend gong to www.marquis-media.com to see what a special promo bike and billboard truck look like.
Also, EVERYONE is doing just blue. Can we see a concept in another color please, or just add a second color to blue?
#72 still needs colors other than blues and greys. Please don't use grey at all.
#76 is better- still needs an icon for a promo bike (pictured at that website)) and I suggest moving the icons underneath "partners" instead of above "activation" maybe? Also needs more color.
#72 still needs colors other than blues and greys. Please don't use grey at all.
#76 is better- still needs an icon for a promo bike (pictured at that website)) and I suggest moving the icons underneath "partners" instead of above "activation" maybe? Also needs more color.
Am a little confused by the color issue in 72, the only gray in that is the shadows on the puzzle piece. There are blue, green and beigey sand color. (Since my monitor is set for graphics, is it possible for you to view on a different monitor, just in case your colors are coming across slightly skewed? It doesn't take much and I have had people swear their monitors were "on" until they looked at a different one.
Ok, so I think we're close. Here is some feedback to try and make one of your designs the winner.
#108- I'd like to swap the bike and the pane in the emblem. I'd also like you to add a boat (like you did in #112 ) and then in the text, make the letter "y"s in Clarity into a"stick person" with the dot inside the top of the "y"?
#110- Same as #108, and there is too much blues and grays- needs some other color.
#112- We like this font best. Can you move the icons centered and below the text instead of above please? And please rearrange the icons in this order- person, bike, truck, plane and the boat last.
Daniel, Is 118 what you were going for in general? The fifth item just isn't going to work with the puzzle, both as a square and as the sphere. No way to get equal sizes on the square unless you did long narrow boxes which another designer is already doing and no way on the sphere, logos so the distortion of the sphere still keeps them recognizable was hard to do with just the four, (and since there is no way to create a puzzle with 5 equal size pieces in that shape unless you went with pie shapes which wouldn't handle the icons well at all since it is thinnest at the center and to even get them somewhat non-distorted you have to place them tight to the center) it is sort of moot). I went ahead and did a star shape since that would allow me five equal shapes to see if you would like that.
Let me know if the other stuff is how you wanted. Wasn't sure on the stick person (if i got it right) and i just assumed you would want the arrow off of the v, since the two things going on with the letters might be too busy.
I went ahead and did the new ones with the type you said you liked best.
Nice work. The star #119 is very interesting in order to get all 5 icons in the emblem.
I think maybe I wasn't clear enough on the sphere and the square (#118 and #110). Two things:
I wanted to replace the person in each with the boat, making just 4 things in the puzzles still. By adding the "head" to the letter "y", that's where the "person" re-emerges.
Also where relevant, I'd like to use true colors on the icon backgrounds. So for the plane, the background should be sky blue and for the boat, the background should be ocean blue. Ans lease use the green and red but find another color (not in the blue/grey family) for the truck background please.
For #118 specifically, please delete "partners" and replace it with "Your Message in Motion". We're weighing that as a slogan now.....
For #119, lets swap the bike and the plane locations with the aforementioned color changes as well.
My partner needs too weigh in today and we'll have some feedback for you then.
I went ahead and did some adjusting. Re: the colors (taking the red from the back of the truck and what to replace it with--I can't keep both the red and green and replace the red behind the truck, because that is the only thing visually linking it in color with the typed words (that and the blue). Also, not sure what to replace it with that doesn't have blue or green (since i put orange and beige in before and you went with the red. So, to maybe make it easier can you go to this site http://www.december.com/html/spec/colorcmyk.html and pick out specific colors and let me know what goes where (just give me the numbers in the parens). (I still think you are seeing grayer colors on your monitor than i am, but this will let me match what you are seeing if i just plug in the numbers from a sample you are looking at). Plus, it will save me from guessing what direction you would like to go. All of the new ones need some slight adjustments and/or cleanup of edges, etc. but at this point unless i know it will at least probably be a winner, it doesn't make sense for me to put any more time in on detail stuff (I hope you understand). If there is one in particular you want to try a couple of different color combos, that is fine, let me do that first (and hopefully lets do the trial on something other than the sphere, since that is what needs the most manipulation :-) ). Let me know where you want to go from here, if there are further changes you would like to see.
I have a partner and basically we're torn between 3 concepts and you own two of them- #133 & #134.We haven't made a final decision yet. You can pull the rest if you'd like.Thank you.