A few of us really like what you did with #53! We are wondering if you could make a few, minor changes for us to compare. First, if you could make the building slightly bigger - just enough to see a few, small squares for windows and a small cross on top of one of the buildings. I was also wondering how it would look with the word church pushed to the right so it's either centered under city on a hill or to the right of center. Overall, we like the clean, simplicity of your work!
Hello pastorbruce First of all thank you for the reply. I will do the changes you suggested no problem. The whole goal of the design is to make it simple and clean without failing to convey the message it needs. the windows might just take away from the simplicity and sometimes less is more. I will upload the revisions shortly so you can see the result.
I feel conflicted about adding the windows. I agree, they might make the logo too complicated with unnecessary detail. On the other hand, more detail makes the logo a little more interesting without much compromise. The detail would be especially nice when we use a large version of it, like with a projector on a screen.
This may be a bit picky, but I was wondering if you change the angle of the hill slightly. The left side is so steep that it is a bit distracting to me. If the shape of the hill is less drastic, it might be more appealing.
I extended the deadline for the contest to give our team a few more days to discuss the options. I would like to wrap this up by the end of the weekend.