Here are some more options with new text, bolder, etc. I also took out the "apps". Also put the logo in a square like most of the iphone apps are in so you would see what it would look like.
we are liking this alot, but it still just feels like it needs a bit more oooomph...the key hold is a GREAT way to show city key, but wondering if you can play around with it some more and make it more intriguing, unique, modern and cool...looking for a lil bit of WOW factor, for recognition...something that really jumps out. Please hit me up with any questions, and thanks again for all your work.
Hi Gayle: LOVING #31, but not the colors...can you try a couple other more dynamic color combos, and still thinking what is INSIDE the key hole should be REALLY interesting...as in..."get the key to your city and everything inside" sort of look...that's where I think this could really turn into brilliance for sure...I know it's a tough challenge considering the size, but let me know what you think. And/or maybe the background should be more lively like yowza or groupon, since you have more space, then the inside is...hmmm...well i dont know...but love where you're going with it. thanks.
Hi Gayle: it does have more pop, and love seeing the color options. That said, we're looking for more HIP and COOL to really stand out...almost like REAL LIFE inside the keyhole...still LOVING the key hold for sure. Here are a couple of links to istockphoto to give you a sense of where we are thinking this should go...more real, than illustration. THANK you so much, we are almost there. Check these out and let me know what you think. Just ideas.
Hi Multibrain, I just did the edits to the logo to get more what you are looking for. The thing is about getting it real, illustrator is a vector program (lines) so we can only make it so real as we arent using photoshop. Let me know if you need me to explain more though or if you want to see more options. thanks, Gayle