ok.. so, the floating squares representing smoke should be in more of an "S" pattern, then also, have a "walkway" of those squares at the bottom of the image to mimick the shape of the smoke. Next, the font is wrong. Please use this one:
http://new.myfonts.com/fonts/insigne/dienstag/ with HOME in all caps. Also, the blue color from #114 is preferred. let's make the gray background darker with a warmer undertone and the watermark lighter(for a timy bit more contrast).
One other thing you might try is "celebrate"(all lower case) ABOVE "HOME" . I realize this will cause "HOME" to be stretched out, but try it.