The colors in #6 & #7 are on the right track, but feel a bit "candy" not spohisticated enough. Also, I don 't care to play up the "Celebration" theme. and if there is to be a stylized house, think ultra-modern...i.e. Dwell Magazine...
nice... #20 is looking good as far as the roofline is concerned...this is much more along the lines of the Mid- century modern look I dig. Font isn't very interesting, but should stay simple(sans-serif). I think incorporating an abstract shape that repeats, maybe subtly in the back ground might be interesting...and work in the pale, translucent aqua.
Hi, thank you for the feedback you are giving me. It is very important for me and I am glad you spare time to guide me.
Do you like the pale aqua I am using? I didn't quite understand what you were saying about the shapes in the backgrond, but I tried something out in #45 - your initials CH are repeating in the background, very pale so the eye isn't trying to focus on the background but still notices it.
I am looking forward to your answer, as only through conversation and guidence we can achieve the best result. :)
thank you for your efforts,. I do not like the use of intials. I would prefer the text to fill the space more completely. my vibe is unique, upscale, vibrant, welcoming, and fun.
hi...theses are still not representative of me and my biz. please visit http://new.myfonts.com/fonts/insigne/montag/ to see the font I like as well as the idea for a logo background i like.... the gray and blue rectangle, watermark, etc.
hi! nice job. I would like to see the background of #214 used and the image and size of #114 combined. The font still isn't right. I would also like to see the little "overlapping squares" be used as stylized smoke floating out the topof the chimney, and off the logo, and repeating at the bottom of the logo like a "walk way" to the house. Balance these equally so there is symetry of placement. If you need further explanation, ask. THANKS!!!
ok.. so, the floating squares representing smoke should be in more of an "S" pattern, then also, have a "walkway" of those squares at the bottom of the image to mimick the shape of the smoke. Next, the font is wrong. Please use this one: http://new.myfonts.com/fonts/insigne/dienstag/ with HOME in all caps. Also, the blue color from #114 is preferred. let's make the gray background darker with a warmer undertone and the watermark lighter(for a timy bit more contrast).
One other thing you might try is "celebrate"(all lower case) ABOVE "HOME" . I realize this will cause "HOME" to be stretched out, but try it.
Oh, I just noticed your comment, sorry. I will try those right out. The font you want to use is not free, and I am trying to find a way to purchase it. Sorry for that inconvinience!
#224 is good... but the overall design isn't what I evnvisioned,. The font is not working for me. Will you try witht he text arrangement I mentioned "celebrate" above "HOME"...
ANd the little squares aren't appealing...maybe make them smaller and add a couple more to make more of an "S" shape out of them...
ok... let's work with #237. Enlarge and stretch "HOME" a little bit to fill the space more. it can be closer to "celebrate" to achieve this result. I have to run out now... but will be back in 1.5 hours. good lucK!