#5 I can't quite tell what's going on in the "TF" because it's so small. I'm afraid the logo wouldn't be large enough in some applications to see it. I think they are stars, but not sure. #2 Let's take #2 and put a line through all the letters like you did in #3 and put COMMERCIAL DRIVER TRAINEES FOUNDATION in blue. #1 Let's see it as it is with a line through all 4 letters.
You know, I may like your original ones better because the black gives it more weight to the name spelled out. Can I also see a version where you take #1 and apply the blue just to the lines and leave the foundation name in black?
Any other different ideas also welcome. I'm showing different directions to client today to get a feel for his likes/dislikes.
now I like #44 and #45 the best. Good treatment of the word foundation in order to get the other words up bigger. #46 nice variation also. Will pick one from #44/#45 and then use #46 to show client in 1 hr.
Showed client 18 designs, so I used you #45. Client liked this logo but concerned about reading FOUNDATION. Told him I had another design didn't include (#44) where FOUNDATION was larger with line above and below. Will show that to him in next round.
Can you work with #45, make FOUNDATION larger like #44 but keep the line to left and right, whatever is left of lines on either side. Any other variations of this logo welcomed. He gravitated to this one and #16 the most, though I have to work on readability on that one for foundation name.