Though this is a nice application of CDTF the foundation name spelled out is just not readable enough in this application. Client is BIG on being able to read the foundation name spelled out also.
That is definitely an improvement on readability. Can you try bumping it up in size just a "little bit" more? I don't want to get it out of proportion but I want to get to a place where I don't think he will disqualify it because he can't quite read it in small applications. I like that you went all white on letters and lightened the lighter blue. Everything is a little brighter. Can you try changing the lines top & bottom to the lighter blue? Keep letters dark blue please. Thank you.
I don't see any adjustment needed at this point. I have submitted it to my client along with other revisions. I should have more results/feedback by Thursday my time. Thank you!