I am the lone advocate of three participants for #52. While I am the decision maker, their input is highly valued. The comments are the box is a little to cartoon-like. Perhaps its i due to the tapering or the stripes (or both). I you are interested in a follow-up submission, Keep the halo, shift the gift box lower.and perhaps show a variotion of font for Catholic that is not between its current scrip and the formal sans serif of Family Gifts
Thanks for your feedback Wordman. I´m glad you liked the idea of the halo. I wanted to do something different. I´ll definitely be back with more samples I hope you and your team could consider.
Hi Again, here you have a new version where the box is less cartoony. Actually it´s more realistic", keeping the halo. Also changed Fonts and balanced sizes. I hope you like it!.
Thanks for the follow-up. Its better. Bring the box lower so that it makes contact the front left corner just breaks the plane of the line on which the word Family Gifts would rest, and add back the horizontal ribbon of #53 or #55
We will see how that would fare in final review tonight at 8:00