HI could you do # 76 with the Carioca in brazil yellow and the word Bowls in purple. Also could you make the wave look a bit like a palm tree dropping the fruit down.
Design # 76 is headed the right direction. The font for Carioca is good but maybe a little more bold and more with the super vibrant green, yellow, and blue of Brazil.
Would be nice is the Carioca Bowls part is incorporated into the wave and we would like to see some versions adding in some palm fronds.
How about integrating the carioca into the wave so the C is the part that curls up andvthe rest of carioca is all in all blue. Then the bowl is surfing on the Carioca (wave).
How about integrating the carioca into the wave so the C is the part that curls up andvthe rest of carioca is all in all blue. Then the bowl is surfing on the Carioca (wave).
Hi, Your request about integrating the "Carioca" into the wave is an idea of the other designer. I think that it's not ethic because he can think that I have copied his idea.
Anyway I will try to integrate the text in a similar way.
Could you pls modify 121 so that the C curls up as the swell of the wave. Pls take the green leaf out. So the fruit is falling from the wave which is the C. On the other end of the word Carioca the water is flatter and smooth surface of water under the whole word Carioca which swings up into a rip curl with the C. This way the word Carioca is integrated in the wave and the bowl is surfing on the word Carioca.
123 is very cool. Can the bowl sit up more on the Carioca and the rip curl come up a bit more.
Try a version with feed your soul with a bowl under the word Bowls too pls. Also try the word Bowls adjusted so ends up slightly to the right of the last a in carioca.
Getting so close. Can you put feed your soul with a bowl in dark green like brazil green and another version in Brazil yellow? Also can the bowl be up more so we see more of it? Maybe the arioca in Carioca come down some.
Great 2 last things 1) do a version with the dot on the I in Carioca as an acai berry that is falling into the bowl. 2). Keep Carioca as is best lower it or raise the rip curl so the bowl is elevated more.
Not sure if u have time but another rad idea is to do a version where instead of a wave the Carioca forms a palm tree and that whole part is in green with the fruits falling from the tree. No worries if not time for that.
Now I have no time, but anyway, if you finally choose this design, during the judging step, we can still put the final touches to the design more calmly.
Also pls play with making the C curve a little more so clearly a C. Along these lines making sure Carioca is clearly the name and not arioca. Thx for the great work! Richard
You are #1 on our list now and top ranked. Pls read all my comments and let me know if you have preguntas. I'm looking forward to these final tweaks. Thanks
this link is a good image of a wave in the shape of a C. Not sure if you can paste it into browser or just search for waves. I think we should tighten the wave on the upswing so it's a C and a swell. The idea that the C which is the wave could eventually be distilled down as the Icon of the brand. So it is embedded as the essence of the logo.
How can the acai bowl be elevated to be more surfing on the wave?
im not sure about the yellow (is it too busy). how can the feed your soul pop but in a subtle way with the green and/or yellow.
si hablo espanol...vivi en 'pana por casi dos anos.
if that link doesn't work, you can see the image if you go to Google and put in "pictures of waves" it should be the first one that comes up.
Also play with fewer fruits falling but make them seem more juicy and delicious. should a few nuts be in the acai bowl too? have you seen images of killer acai bowls on line?
you have all the elements we want and now it's fine tuning trying to take as much of the complexity and convert it to simplicity without losing the concepts and feelings.
Si entiendes bien el español me expresare así, si no te importa (de todas formas el ingles lo entiendo bien). Yo casi tardo más en expresarme en ingles que en realizar los cambios en el diseño :)
Me parece buena idea lo de la C como emblema separado para según que soportes.
En breve te envío las variaciones en la C/wave, la "acai bowl" y la franja amarilla
perfecto. escribes el ingles super bien, por eso yo no sabia q te costaba tanto tiempo. si puedes mandar mensajes en ingles. gracias por tu trabajo y tu flexibilidad.
Could you just use one shade of blue for C wave with the Carioca slightly darker. Pls add acai bolw and Bowls as before. Leave out feed your soul, Gracias
otra cosa. si miras al foto de la onda en google, el color es mas oscuro al exterior y viene mas claro con blanco encima al interior. puedes hacerlo asi y de esta forma el color azul "blends" desde oscuro al mas claro y Carioca esta escrito en azul mas claro...como te parece? Cuanto mas suave el azul cambia del exterior al interior mejor. abrazos
otra cosa. si miras al foto de la onda en google, el color es mas oscuro al exterior y viene mas claro con blanco encima al interior. puedes hacerlo asi y de esta forma el color azul "blends" desde oscuro al mas claro y Carioca esta escrito en azul mas claro...como te parece? Cuanto mas suave el azul cambia del exterior al interior mejor. abrazos
otra cosa. si miras al foto de la onda en google, el color es mas oscuro al exterior y viene mas claro con blanco encima al interior. puedes hacerlo asi y de esta forma el color azul "blends" desde oscuro al mas claro y Carioca esta escrito en azul mas claro...como te parece? Cuanto mas suave el azul cambia del exterior al interior mejor. abrazos