#77 is our favourite of the two...can you try putting the image on the right side but still balancing out the text...we like the font/typeface by the way.....
for #87 would have to get in closer to the owl face so the viewer can understand the wisdom of the owl as well as it's heart shaped face.....please give it a try...!
Thank you so much for the feedback. #95 with the image to the right. Please let me know if you would like to see anything else and I will work on the owl :)
- 'by DESIGN' in purple instead of 'CAREERS' - no bird in the heart of the key
also how about a version with some type of rounded box around the whole thing or around the words? something to make it look like it all fits together?
#344 can you make the center part of the sun graphic a little larger (same size as in #250) and draw two versions
1) rays in yellow only and
2) rays in yellow and orange just like it is right now in #344
also for #249 I'd like to try something ... please put the words on top of the sun so that the sun looks like it's rising in the background....let's have a version of this with rays and without....
I'm not sure I'm clear on make the center of the graphic larger? 344 is the same as 250 only the entrie circle has been scaled down due to the addition of the rays. If I just make the center on 344 larger it will change the look of the whole circle, is that what you want to do? If you could clarify for me, I would appreciate that.
What I did was just make the center rings larger not the entire center graphic. I was not clear on that so let me know if you want the entire sun larger, etc.? I'm not quite sure what exactly you want larger. So sorry for the confusion :)
Ok let's continue with your design...I'm sure we can wrap this up soon...let's work from #382
- please do not adjust the size of the sun anymore (or anything to do with the graphic); it looks great! - only changes we're looking for are in the typeface: - the "BY DESIGN" must pop out, not the "CAREERS" so please do what you feel is necessary for this to happen but keep in mind that we want everything to look balanced (so perhaps bolding the BY DESIGN part and not the CAREERS is one idea to achieve this as well as less character to character spacing in CAREERS and more in BY DESIGN) - let's try increasing the size of all the text so that it matches the height of the sun (I think everything will look more balanced this way) - also please try some different fonts that you feel represent a professional, premium service - also please try some different colors for the typeface itself (such as greys, browns, etc...)
I hope I haven't overwhelmed you but some tweaking on the typeface to really nail the design is what I'm looking for....
ps. if you want to try some different (off white-ish) backgrounds for maximum 'pop'/'wow' factor please go ahead...ultimately we are looking for a VERY bold high contrast look but it has to look premium and professional.....
#384, #385 I know you said not to change the size of the sun, but I did need to scale down the entire logo in order to fit it in the window :) There is a sample of both grey and brown. Please let me know if there is anything else.
#385 looks great, I think the brown in the text helps to make it overall more pleasing....BY DESIGN looks good now!
regarding the black and white version, I find the graphic looks quite messy when printed (all of our print will be in black+white)...is is possible for you to look at that and improve (perhaps just cleaning up the graphic to more of an outline look)?
(final logo comes in a transparent version, various colors for text I suppose and black+white version, right?)
Thank you so much for choosing my design! I will be out for a bit but will put together the final files when I return and get them over to you. Please let me know if you would like to discuss the greyscale, black and white, etc. versions.