Hi Nancy, My colleague and I liked how you were the only designer to use different colors for the tagline text. But we weren't keen on the exclamation point. Also the colors felt a little too vibrant...our palatte uses the orange and green and sometimes blue (in a more muted tone). Is there another icon you could suggest that isn't an exclamation point - perhaps a diamond shape - four points? or something that conveys a blended approach to marketing? Marketing, PR and Social Media? Thanks so much for your submission! Nicole
Nancy, I like your revision... can you swap the emphasis from legal to captivate? I'm curious to see hte difference. Also, I like the four points, but am not sure about the negative square space... Also, how would that look with a horizontal orientation? Thanks for your good work! Nicole
I tried to make the overall design more dynamic and tightened up the elements. I like the play with the negative space - the four points create a space for what might be.
Nancy, my colleagues and I really like where this is going. Can I see the horizonal version with the same / similar text treatment as the vertical? (ini-cap, | in between tagline words) And can we perhaps see an alteration leveraging an orange color in the mix? Really keen on both versions and agree with the negative space upon further reflection.
Sorry I couldn't get to your revisions before your contest ended. If you would like to see revisions, slip me into first and send me a message. Thanks for your consideration!