#26 - We're not a fan of the reverse lettering. It's too dark and blocky. Can you switch it with the font and color from #32. Maybe also a variation with a color that fits into the rest of your design and a slightly softer font.
Also, is there a way to incorporate a girl graphic/icon into the image in some way.
Finally, contrary to every other note :-) can you take this same concept and simplify it? Maybe something more streamlined.
Also, in a note, can you tell us how you would adapt this logo to work for other other camp so it's similar in style but looks different at the same time.