I really like where you have started with this. If you could now incorporate the italkian heritage into the symbol, I think it would be great. Maybe making the leaves into olive branches. If you couyld add the Italian flag/colours that would also be great. Maybe even using #5 entries idea opf the golf clubs in a "cross" but using the italian and Australian flags? They could sit behind your design
Also, as with #8 the use of "4 hands" in the symbol reflects a bond/togetherness that I like. Something like this in the centre of your image would be great.
#21 is the best for me - i think it capatures all of the elements ive asked for and looks like a "golf" logo to me. there are a couple of things that im not quite sure of though 1) the middle symbol - Im just wondering if it makes it look too cluttered & 2) the coloring. I actually am torn between your silver version and this one. i actually like what #22 has done with the CM - could you see what that symbol would look like instead of the 4 people? Could you also try it in the silver coloring again? lastly, could you change the slogan to "“la famiglia prima di tutto” Thanks
Thank you for you feedback however it is a rule on logotournament that we cannot copy another designer's logo. But I will try to create something else for the centre.
#38 Thanks for making the change in the centre of the logo by adding CM. For me though, this still remains the only area of the logo that doesnt quite feel right. I'm really wanting a "less cluttered" look and I think the 4 people make it too conjested. Could you please try removing the four people and just having a golf ball and the 2 clubs there??
#38 - following on from my previous note where Ive asked you to remove the 4 people and just have a gold ball and clubs - one way to still represent a team of 4 could be to split the golf ball into 4 parts - you could then even have 4 little circles above each section of the golf ball (like #22)
OK - thanks for all your efforts so far. Im gonna see if we can combine a few of them into 1 now. So here goes...............
CAMPMARA the same style writing and size as #38 "la Famiglia" slogan same as #59 (in proportion to fit with the larger CAMPMARA font) Olive branches to be the same shape and size as #9 but matching the colour in #38 The same size larger circle that you have in #9 (just inside the olive branches) The same size golf ball that you have in #9 slightly smaller golf clubs than you have in #57 sitting behind the ball 4 dots sitting North, South, East and West (same position as the heads in #9)
#62 - i like the "less cluttered" look but think its now probably 2 "simple". ould you try splitting the golf ball in 4 (ie having 3 vertical lines runiing from the top of the ball to the bottom - having the 2 centre peicese the same width with the 2 pieces at each end the same size eachother, but smaller than the centre pieces)
Could you then have the 4 dots above each section - representing 4 heads above their bodys.
Glad to do the alterations but I don't understand what you're asking for…
"(ie having 3 vertical lines runiing from the top of the ball to the bottom - having the 2 centre peicese the same width with the 2 pieces at each end the same size eachother, but smaller than the centre pieces)"
Hi Desine_Guy - thanks for all your efforts so far. #82 is my favourite and the one I will choose as my winner.. Thankyou!
There are still a few things I'd like to try before we fininsh though. Disregarding my previous note, can you: 1) Keeping everything else the same, try making the 4 dots a bit smaller in size?
Could you also try: 2) Keeping everything else the same, having an inner line linking the 4 dots (making this line the same width as the outer line)