Thank you for your submission. I like the way you are going with this. I find the name of the event to be difficult to read. Perhaps a different font or color?
Thanks for feedback... I am in No Calif and know Palm Springs well... trying for a touch of retro without overdoing it... I can try other fonts but wanted to try outside the circle first.... let me know how you want me to modify more...
That is much easier to read. We don't have to worry about embroidery, we won't use it in that format. We will use it in a 4 color print process on paper and on the web.