I like these both a lot and they kind jumped out at me. I do have some concerns though about the detail of the swirl icon and how that will read if, for example, I want to shrink down just the icon to use as a favicon or something. There is a lot of detail and thin lines (especially in the middle) that get lost when shrunk down. Is there anything you can do to keep this basic idea but maybe thicken the interior lines or something else to make the swirl stand better on its own?
While you're at it, I'd also love to see if we can make the "Strategy Group" just a bit more prominent? I'm not sure which font I like best but right now I'm leaning toward #171. Can I see that one with the Green as well (and maybe a couple other colors if you have any ideas).
I send the versions with the changes done. I've tried the icon as favicon and it looks good. I always send all the variations of the logo (B&W, gray, favicon, etc,...). And I send also another square version. Thank you!
I really do like #210 and #212 ... I'm going to show the top 5 or 6 to my partners and get their final input tomorrow. Thanks for the submissions and please send over any other ideas you have at the last minute - would love to see them.
Actually - on #210 - For some reason the very bottom line in the swirl seems a little bit disconnected from the rest of it to me. I'm not sure if there is anything that can be done about that but it seems to me like its a separate piece when I look at it. I'm going to bring these to my partners in a couple of hours so if you have something by then I'll show them - otherwise we'll go with what we have.
Thank you very much for your feedback. I've rework the lines and the colors, for making the bottom line more integrated with the others. I send you also a B&W version. Thank you!
Sorry about this Carrion - but hopefully this will be very easy ... Can I see a version of #276 where you make the swirl much bigger and put the type over the top? Want to see what that would look like all wrapped together.
Actually - I'm just looking to see what a bigger format version looks like - the type on top of the icon is an idea for that but if it looks better with the icon above the type or whatever, that could work as well.
I send a bigger and above situated icon in 3 versions, little, little with a shadow below and bigger. I think it looks better above but if you want to see it below the typo, just tell me!. Thank you!!