#2 I like what you did here but it doesn't feel consumer friendly somehow. Maybe it's the balance of the logo with the heavy X or that the X now dominates too much. If there was another way to integrate the connection or the X without going so heavy and offsetting the logo balance it would be great to explore that. Thanks.
Hi there, thanks for your feedback. Here is my revision. I create wordmark logo by balancing the lettering, i also incorporate connection by two white arrow (on the "X"). Looking forward for your feedback again.
I really like where you are headed with #6 my concern is that it is hard to read. Is there anyway to make it easier to read you think? Thanks for your entries!
Hi, thanks for your honest feedback. This is my revision for entry #6 by making it easier to read but not still use the intersected element. Would gladly know your thought again.