on # 30 I like the roof being a darker shade. I do think I like it in blue better. Maybe if we could Make the house blue, make butler builders a dark gray, and then dream. design. build. live. Blue. Also, if you could drop the bottom windows a little bit. If you look at #22 it is just a little more detailed. I like your design more but like his detail a little more.
1. make house a little taller, then move upper windows up by doing that you can raise front porch back up and bottom windows up a little. make all windows same space apart like you had on the first one, and bottom ones to line up. 2 Take arches off top of windows 3. take outlines off chimney and off border of house. 4. take dental mold off front roof. 5 Make a little less overhang on both sides of roof. 6. Take little window and dental mold off front porch.
#74 make the trees different from each other, make them where the leave come closer to the ground. make the trees the same color as they are in #70. Take windows off roof. Then make dream design build live a font not quite as fancy as my third pick logos font. Then put that house in your #87 #90 logos.
I also like #96 and #91. Can you make the end of the b the chimney? don't outline that b so much. Do one like that. Then change the font of the b. Give a few choices, but the one part of the b has to be straight.
Everything is looking so good. #47 is still my Favorite. Can you put in the outline or seal you have in both #116 and #117. after you have #47 house in there, Can you make another #116 but totally round.
Can you give #118 and #119 a darker b like 120 has?
Can you look at my last 4 uploads and see if you can make your #117 look like that. I like the house being white and around it being blue. Makes the house look more real.
I've been getting feed back and people seem to like #115. Can you put a foundation under it like #134, the dark band across the bottom. Lifting the house even more. Make the house white and put an oval around it. make Inside of oval blue. Make roof gray.
I am really liking that. Make the oval a little longer, just a little, about like #180. Make it the blue color of #175 with fade that that one has. Make the DREAM. DESIGN. BUILD. LIVE. like #175 under oval and straight. Make it a little bigger than that one. Make the trees look like #180. Make rail on stairs a little more thin.
Make everything inside oval a little bigger, getting closer to the edges.
Make one with the roof darker, not as much as #175 but close. Make foundation, and all words same color as roof.
I already try the dark grey for the words, but they really didn't work on dark blue background (like #175), So my suggestion is to keep the words bright color if you want the blue background has faded color like in #183.
I know you have done a lot of work, and i still need to work on this a few more times, so just to let you know before you do any more work. you are the winner. I won't make it official for a few days yet.
I think when you stretched the oval it also stretched the house. i like the shape of #163 the best. Its taller and looks the right proportion. I still like the trees of #180 more, look at them close. I want to put the Established 1999 Back where you had it in #163. Move the j. r. butler inc. to the bottom rim, where established 1999 is now. I like the darker roof, the darker fence, and the darker foundation. but on the taller house #163, But in the oval of #183.
Color Choices :
I like the #163 blue and #183 Blue. Try Dream. Design. Build. Live. In Gray. Try the two lines around the oval in gray. In the #163 blue try the gray Butler builders.
Edwin, Thanks so much for your work. It looks fantastic. I have a couple of other logos for other companies I will be putting up soon. Do you have a regular email? Send me some contact info.