Hey, interesting feedback from survey. Some commented body looks too feminine. Can you visualize a way make the body look "less feminine"?
We don't want to lose the simplicity of the body design. Is it possible to make body design look "less feminine"? Open to ideas.
Also, for a second version, could you replace body head with a simple heart? Can visualize and maybe something there. Thank you very much.
Thanks for keeping my design as one of the finalists. I have the similar font in my design, i just did some modifications to the font to make it more sporty. You can see i adjusted the leg of R, and modified letter B, A and the E.
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We are surveying group for top 5 only, you are top 2. Possible now that you can see others, possible to closer match font to number one car position? Not looking for Italics, but more a comparable font, we are close.
Thanks Dennis, these are excellent. Don't worry about any more revisions until Phase II, you are in Top 3 without issue, really Top 2. Thank you for your efforts.
Hi! Thank you so much, these are wonderful. Would you be able to do one taking the center person character out, and maybe tie the words together in some way? What do you think?
Very nice, thank you. just a few tweaks and we are there.
1-Slide body down slightly more, past horizontal text line.
Move FITNESS down to make room as needed.
2-color right side body red and left side body blue coming together.
Hey, really like this design. Please modify,
1-can you remove flame all together. 2-Remove embossing from lettering. 3-Make body silhouette slightly larger. And start blue from feet to red through the body.
4-Make red more crimson red.
This would be perfect if could overlay BURN rate over top of flame, with body silhouette deeper between letters. Could reverse colors of BURNRATE text may work. Do want FITNESS in black. Thank you!
Would it look right coming out between N and R? Also, change Blue R flame to blue gradient into red above.
Is it not possible to impose BURNRATE over top of flame? Also, try more embossed type font.
Thanks for the continued feedback. I have submitted #36 and #37 in regards to your first comment. I am working on the feedback you gave later and will submit soon
almost like BURNRATE FITNESS on fire with body silhouette coming out of flames. Love design of flame and body, now just matter how to organize I think.
1-Take flame and overlay behind BURNRATE FITNESS, with falme coming out of top past text.
2-Highlight BURNRATE edges in white to emboss over flame.
3-Use body coming out of center of BURNRATE somehow, looks like in mind like will be very symmetrical.
Hope this is guidance you are looking for? Really good work, thank you.
Can you move body slightly left on center flame? Also, change BURN to more Crimson Red color and possibly RATE color to Blue? Then can see version with logo to left? Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback and i am glad that you liked my effort, i have tried to add a figure in the flame as suggested. Please check the recent submissions
really like this idea. Possible to highlight name with white and put flame behind the text? Would be really cool if you could create silhouette of body in flame? Just Delete tag phrase.
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We don't want to lose the simplicity of the body design. Is it possible to make body design look "less feminine"? Open to ideas.
Also, for a second version, could you replace body head with a simple heart? Can visualize and maybe something there. Thank you very much.
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Can you change red to deeper crimson red? Many thanks.
Having survey completed over weekend, making decision Monday.
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Also, is this red crimson red?
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We are surveying group for top 5 only, you are top 2. Possible now that you can see others, possible to closer match font to number one car position? Not looking for Italics, but more a comparable font, we are close.
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1-Could I see this with FITNESS same font as BURNRATE.
2-Please add heart rate monitor frequency to this one between BURN RATE and FITNESS.
Many thanks. Great ideas.
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1-Slide body down slightly more, past horizontal text line.
Move FITNESS down to make room as needed.
2-color right side body red and left side body blue coming together.
Many thanks!
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1-can you remove flame all together. 2-Remove embossing from lettering. 3-Make body silhouette slightly larger. And start blue from feet to red through the body.
4-Make red more crimson red.
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Its been midnight here. I will do this revision first thing in the morning
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Is it not possible to impose BURNRATE over top of flame? Also, try more embossed type font.
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1-Take flame and overlay behind BURNRATE FITNESS, with falme coming out of top past text.
2-Highlight BURNRATE edges in white to emboss over flame.
3-Use body coming out of center of BURNRATE somehow, looks like in mind like will be very symmetrical.
Hope this is guidance you are looking for? Really good work, thank you.
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Really cool idea you put forth, thank you.