Brilliant ElixirLogo Design Contest

Thank you so much for this inspired icon. You've captured the early 1900's in a way that also speaks to the retro nature of American 1970's. I love it.

1) Could you try bringing the center of the E in deeper into the B a little?

2) Could you try making the curls of the E centered in the top and bottom of the B? At this point they're a bit to the left and could be repositioned to be more central.

Thank you. Your work is top notch. Now, we just have to hone it in.

To our health & happiness,
Brandon

Hi Brandon,

Good day! I am truly appreciative of your comments and suggestions. No problem, I'll be posting the modifications in a short while.

Thank you!

Best regards,
Alvin

Here's the update ---- #197

Hope I got it right.

Thanks:-)

#197 is really nice.

Could you try changing the shape of the E a bit by making the width of the E a little thicker? I want the middle of the E having a wider indentation. Does this make sense? I can send a rough sketch if that helps.

Best,
Brandon

I wonder if a slightly larger E would be nice like I have here.

Here's an example (poorly done in photoshop) of a larger E inside of the B.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2eMw_ThWBUOSlZheXBuMFQ1T2M/view?usp=sharing
(sorry about how poor this example is)

I think I like a moderate black border between the E and the B.

Thank you!
Brandon

working on it...thanks for the help, Brandon!:-)

Here are some options: #198, #199, #200

Feedback appreciated.

Thanks!:-)