I really like the look/feel of these designs - very bold lettering, plus using stars and a little bit of our brand color tones. Would you be willing to work a little more on the background of these, maybe by making the "cracks" look a little more pronounced, or make it look like the words are breaking through a brick wall? I'd love to see what you can do with these! Thanks!
Hi on #51 I try to make a draft for variation of my previous concept. If you think this arm break through wall would work, I will make a polished version of it.
Looks like one of your brick wall designs is going to be the winner, it's just going to be difficult deciding which one! I've shown your logo to about 10 of my co-workers and they like the concept; however they've had some feedback on it that I was hoping you would consider for a revised submission: 1) Is there a different font you can use, perhaps an architectural font that's a little cleaner? Also, I noticed some of the letters are kind of tilted one way or another, and we'd like to see them straight up and down.
2) Is there a way to make the bricks less pronounced so the letters are more of the focus?