thanks very much. i like the general concept but it's feeling a little like the logo for a children's dentist. i think it's because the straight "ray" elements remind me of crayons. see if you can play with it to make it a little more mature. also please try different colors. try with no green. thanks
thanks for the white version. can you please also try some different (brighter) colors for the sun element rays. just to see what it looks like. thanks
we are trying to find something that will show up nicely in a "channel lit sign" as this will be on the highway. like the McDonald's M shows up. but not so tacky.