Breakwater Equity PartnersLogo Design Contest

#28: Great work here! Can we make the wave be less soft? Maybe slightly different edges to them?

Of course ch... will do! And thanks for the great ranking!

Here are the revisions on the design. Added edges on the design to make it less soft and also added more of the waves to make it tighter. Also with two color variations... easy to change if you like.
Any other suggestions are more than welcome!

(This comment references Entry #45)

and one with split typography as the wave hits...

(This comment references Entry #48)

I like the 'BreakWater' word to be all same color. Please use all Caps, but make the B and W larger than the rest.

I like the modification to the waves. Our lady partner says they look like Caesar leaves... please see the currently ranked #1 and #2 for a wave line type style.... maybe incorporate something towards that effect.

Also, I really like when the "Equity Group" has the horizontal lines coming from each side (see other designs).

You are really, really on track here!!!

My partners say you could win this if we can hit the issues I sent you at 11:30. I really like your style.

#79 and #82 have the kind of lines we are looking for.

another concept... more abstract in form.

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The new design can be thought of as both as a wave and a sea shell (safety, home, security)...as in your brief.
Entry 102/103

#102: Great line style, I think the lines are too close together... kinda looks like a wing more than a wave... we're getting so close to perfecting this one. I really like it.

Maybe give it some more substance in the bottom 1/2 of the wave so it looks less like its originating from below the B...

Thanks!!

Ya know, #140 could be really interesting too... I like where you are going with that one as well... very creative!

I've got it!! Use the wave/lines from #132 and that will be amazing!!!!