Can you try making the most inner ring a deep purple colour? Another variation i'd like to see is like a pastel blue ring. I'd also like the slogan line to stick out a little more too.
Good to see a use of colour into the mix. Opened me eyes up to a few options.
I really like how the rings look like a target behind the lettering, aligns well to the idea of 'targeted marketing'. I still like your #11 best. Can you however make the target stick out a little more? Here are my thoughts and hopefully I make sense. Let me know if I don't! Comments are about #11
- Currently, the 3rd ring from the outside is dark (then dark again on 5th ring), can you start the dark ring from the 2nd and then continue the order of light - dark - light etc (so 3rd ring would then be light). - Also make the centre a solid dark circle (like a target). - Some of your submissions i.e #12 & #13, don't have the white gap between the 1st and 2nd ring. Can a see a version of this please (incorporating my above 2 comments).
Thanks Kent - great work. Let me know if I haven't explained well enough!
Hi Kent, With entries #18 & #19 can you expand the inner solid circle to the ring next to it - so essentially the bullseye of the target is a little bigger.
Wow your really fast with those! Very impressed. I'm actually away from home on a holiday with the wife so as soon as I get a chance to visit an Internet cafe again will review on a proper screen and get back to you!
Hi Kent - still haven't had a chance to check the latest designs on a proper screen but the centre of the bullseye appears to be an open circle? If I am seeing correctly can u please make the centre a solid circle? A rough example of something I found in google images: http://bit.ly/fWlxIE - hopefully the image does a better job in explaining what I'd like behind the lettering.